tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3849809240340884036.post11607725263775266..comments2024-02-18T15:33:14.203+00:00Comments on Cafe Aphra: An Online Community for Writers: One Rainy Night, MidweekAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18211549312672749091noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3849809240340884036.post-10334894071365138962015-10-05T20:15:23.370+01:002015-10-05T20:15:23.370+01:00Thanks for taking the time to comment, Jim (esp co...Thanks for taking the time to comment, Jim (esp considering your laziness ; P )<br /><br />I only meant this to be a bit of flash but it seems to have caught people's imagination more than I expectedAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3849809240340884036.post-17206340417348871142015-10-05T18:48:55.287+01:002015-10-05T18:48:55.287+01:00Clever. Perfect literary tension created by the “M...Clever. Perfect literary tension created by the “Maybe they did, but didn’t like what they saw,”. Like the others who commented, I would like to read more--chapter two and then some. <br />(BTW, I am Jim Cunningham but I post under anonymous since I am too lazy to create an account)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3849809240340884036.post-30666417865692508122015-10-01T13:24:44.909+01:002015-10-01T13:24:44.909+01:00Thank you both for your comments. Maybe this'...Thank you both for your comments. Maybe this'll be the start of something....Nickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04690027047522452946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3849809240340884036.post-87224591995128059762015-09-26T15:02:46.394+01:002015-09-26T15:02:46.394+01:00This reads like a prequel to a compelling novel.This reads like a prequel to a compelling novel.Franceshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12884854503494255867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3849809240340884036.post-26290370190501181702015-09-25T17:10:16.814+01:002015-09-25T17:10:16.814+01:00Amusing, fun, but still, an anecdote. You could de...Amusing, fun, but still, an anecdote. You could develop this and make it amazing.jJoy Mannéhttp://www.joymanne.orgnoreply@blogger.com