Listening In
In the
locker room a mother
and
small-voiced daughter enter
adjoining
showers. I hear
their
voices rise above their
twin
cascades. Hear the ping
on the
metal divide between
their
matching work to remove
this
morning's ocean salt and all
of the
beach that clings. The daughter
calls
out to let her mother know
she was
able to reach the soap.
To let
her know how the water
helps
her rinse off all the soap.
All by
herself.
She
inquires if her mother likes
her
shower too and her mother
laughs
an answer which flows
above,
below the divider to reach
the
child's upturned face.
Her
soapy feet.
I have
had only sons and never
minded
until this steamy room.
Not a
longing, really, but a blossoming
a mother
and daughter happened
to
include me in.
Patricia O’Brien
OH, this is marvelous. I will read it again and again. I have a son and a daughter and grandchildren, boys and girls. How you have highlighted intimacy taken for granted. Thank you.
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